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Great first attempt! Totally sums it up :-) #prose4t
I love haikus! The challenge is to get all the meaning in to so few syllables I think. This is a great first attempt - I particularly love the first line, it really sets the scene. #prose4t
Great haiku - love the alliteration in the final line.
Sums thunder up perfectly! I must have a go at this #theprompt
Brilliant first attempt :) I'm writing one every day this year with a photo challenge and it's much harder than I first thought!
Fabulous! Amazingly evocative of thunder, in so few words :) Thanks so much for linking to #ThePrompt
Atmospheric indeed! #Prose4T
Ooh yes, love the similes, lots of description in so few words. I'm not too familiar with haikus but from reading some of the other comments, it sounds like (no pun intended, given my simile comment!) you've cracked it! #ThePrompt
Oh I love haikus and because of their rules you have to really think about every word used, no wastage, and you've done a great job. Really sums it up precisely, concisely and creatively. Love it #theprompt
This is great. I love the last line! #ThePrompt
Haikus are great. An excellent way to out all that creativity in one compact burst, and it's especially prudent here for summing up that clap of thunder. Brilliant x
I have always loved Haikus and this is utterly brilliant - so well written :) Thank you for linking to Prose for Thought :) x
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